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Exclusive Sneak Peek: Prologue of “The Summer of the Sentinels” 🌟

Dear Reader,

I’m excited to present an exclusive first look at the prologue of my upcoming novel, “The Summer of the Sentinels”! This sneak peek is a special preview of the next chapter in the adventures of Ava and her friends.

The Summer of the Sentinels – Prologue


The prologue is still in its draft form and has not been revised or copy-edited yet. I am eager to hear your feedback and thoughts on this early glimpse into the story.


The Book of Prophecy

Ava Mason had the dream about her childhood again. This time, the labyrinth of her dreams led her back to the well-trodden paths of her youth. The clarity of her recollections seemed to defy the haziness of dreams. In her slumber, she was whisked away to a time gone by, back to the seclusion of the quaint cabin nestled deep within the forest, cocooned by towering redwood trees. Sunlight filtered through the dense canopy, casting dancing shadows on the forest floor. Ava wandered these familiar paths in her dreams, each step taking her back to the carefree days of her childhood.

In the eye of this whirlwind of memories, her youthful companions—Nate, Willow, Kyle, and Brandon—came alive, their laughter echoing through the cabin as they moved their assorted toys—an array of miniature monsters, robots, and even a figure of a strange-looking girl with an accompanying tiny robot—as if they were the heroes and villains of an epic tale. Nate’s eyes lit up as he orchestrated a battle between robots, his movements quick and excited. Willow meticulously arranged her figurines in a defensive formation, her brow furrowed in concentration.

Amidst the symphony of youthful exuberance, Ava sat perched on a worn-out sofa, cradling an aged, red notebook in her hands. Its battered cover boasted the title ‘Book of Prophecy,’ etched in her young handwriting. This ledger of make-believe was their anchor to an imagined universe, their playing pieces breathing life into it with each move.

Their narrative, filled with intergalactic warriors and cosmic monsters, unfolded in spontaneous bursts. “And then the evil Xenoformers, cruel aliens from outer space, attack to conquer the world!” Brandon announced with theatrical flair, sending his monstrous toy crashing onto the table. Ava, dutifully playing the part of the scribe, diligently noted down the progression of their story in the prophecy book.

“But then, the Earth Defense Force and the Sentinels arrive!” Nate chimed in, his voice ringing out as he brought a toy figure of a giant robot into the mix. Ava swiftly noted this heroic intervention, her hand keeping pace with the frantic progression of their tale.

The ebb and flow of their narrative continued, with Willow adding, “But then, when everyone thinks that the world is at peace, the Xenoformers return and launch a surprise attack!” More monsters, courtesy of Willow, swarmed Nate’s robot. Ava’s pen flew across the page, diligently recording the sudden twist. She then paused, her gaze shifting to her friends, “What happens next?”

The room fell silent, each of them lost in thought. Then, their faces lit up in identical grins. “Then Ava, with the help of a time-traveling ally and her friendly robot, becomes the hero of humanity and saves the day, together with her friends,” they said in unison, their laughter filling the cabin. Ava found the absurdity of the scenario amusing, her laughter mingling with theirs.

With the laughter dying down, Nate shifted his gaze to Ava. His voice fell to a grave whisper, “After saving humanity, Ava is betrayed by a trusted friend and suffers a dark fate.” This revelation marked a drastic turn in their playful narrative. His words echoed in the room as the four children swarmed around Ava, their fingers dancing on her sides, causing her to dissolve into fits of laughter.

“Okay, okay—I give up, please!” Ava gasped between chuckles. “I can’t write this down if you tickle me.”

As her laughter subsided, Ava closed the book and regarded her friends with a gravely serious expression. “This is the Book of Prophecy—everything that is written in this book is going to come true.” Her friends nodded, their young faces wearing masks of earnest solemnity as they pressed their hands onto the book.

“You have to swear to protect the Book of Prophecy with your life and don’t let it fall into the hands of the enemy.” Ava’s gaze drifted towards their bookshelf, lingering over a collection of horror stories. “Else the evil Nyarlathotep will rise to power and destroy the world at the end of the millennium.”

The children looked at each other, their young faces wearing masks of earnest solemnity. “We swear, we’ll protect this book with our lives,” they vowed, the gravity of their promise hanging in the air.

As the late afternoon sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows through the cabin windows, Ava suggested, “Let’s go to the radio tower.” Her eyes gleamed with excitement. “We need to check if we got a response to our message.”

***

As they trekked through the woods, Ava’s thoughts drifted to the game they had played the night before. She had run a Dungeons & Dragons campaign all summer, weaving a tale of bravery and mystery that had kept her friends on the edge of their seats. The game had ended with a cryptic message from the oracle: “Seek the Dark Tower on the night of the Grand Cross.”

Nate seemed to be reading her mind. “Are we going to continue the Dungeons & Dragons campaign tonight?”

Ava nodded, her mind still buzzing with questions on how to tie everything together.

Kyle buzzed in. “Yeah, but we still haven’t figured out how to get into the Dark Tower. It’s supposed to be the final showdown.”

“The Dark Tower again?” Nate grumbled.

Willow, catching up, chimed in, “And what about the Grand Cross? I remember you mentioned it in the game. What’s the deal with that again?”

Kyle, always eager to share his astronomical knowledge, leaned forward. “You guys remember the Grand Cross I mentioned? It’s happening in August 1999, at the end of the millennium. The planets will align in a cross, and get this—each point matches the signs of the four beasts from the apocalypse. It’s like the stars are lining up for something epic.”

They had spent hours researching and dreaming up scenarios together, and their creativity had culminated in the creation of the “Oracle of Ava,” an elaborate prophecy that had found its way into their game and the Book of Prophecy.

The path led them to a clearing where the remnants of an old radio tower stood tall against the sky. It was their adventure playground, a place where they could dream without limits. The tower loomed above them, casting long shadows that seemed to stretch into another world. Although the radio tower had once been the epicenter of their imaginative escapades, its allure had begun to wane. Now, they talked about exploring the caves underneath Aurora Bay, a daunting prospect that both thrilled and terrified them.

As they gathered around the base of the tower, Ava pulled out a small, handheld radio they had repurposed for their experiments. They had been sending out signals to space all summer, hoping to contact alien life. Tonight, they were eagerly awaiting a response.

The radio crackled to life, emitting a series of beeps and static. On the screen, a single four-letter word appeared, flickering with a strange, otherworldly light. Her friends buzzed with excitement, their whispers filled with awe and wonder. They had really contacted alien life. Ava carefully noted the mysterious word in the book, their imaginations running wild with the possibilities of what it could mean.

As the stars began to emerge, twinkling in the dusky sky, her friends looked at Ava. The screen flickered, the word glowing eerily. Kyle’s voice trembled, “What if they’re like the Xenoformers…?”

A distant, unearthly sound echoed through the forest, low and guttural, like a beast’s growl or an ancient chant. The sound grew louder, sending shivers down their spines. Ava’s heart raced as she glanced at her friends, their faces pale and eyes wide with fear. The forest seemed to hold its breath, the shadows around them darkening as if in anticipation.

Ava’s heart raced, and then she awoke with a sudden shock.


Thank you for your continued support and enthusiasm. It means the world to me to have you on this journey. Enjoy the sneak peek, and as always, feel free to share your thoughts!

The Importance of Novel Formatting and Beta Readers in the Writing Process

I’m excited to share an update on my first novel! I recently finished revising my manuscript, and I also took the time to format it properly. I already talked about the revision process in the last blog post, so you learn more about it there if you like. The next step is to send it out to beta readers for feedback. In this post, I’ll talk about the importance of beta readers, novel formatting, how challenging it can be, and how I used Atticus Writer to simplify the process. Additionally, I’ll invite interested readers to sign up as beta readers for a second round of feedback.

What are beta readers?

Beta readers are a group of people who read your manuscript before it’s published. Their role is to give you feedback on the story and help you identify areas that need improvement. Beta readers can be anyone from friends and family to other writers or even strangers you meet online. I found my beta readers by putting out a call on social media and asking for volunteers.

What I hope to gain from beta readers

My goal in sending my manuscript to beta readers is to get a sense of how readers will react to my story. I’m hoping to get feedback on everything from the pacing and structure to the character development and overall readability. I want to make sure my story is engaging and satisfying, and I’m eager to hear what my beta readers have to say.

Inviting readers to sign up as beta readers

If you’re interested in becoming a beta reader for my novel, I would love to hear from you! I will be looking for a second round of beta readers after I receive feedback from the first round. As a beta reader, you’ll have the opportunity to read my manuscript before it’s published and provide feedback that will help me improve the story. If you’re interested, please sign up through my website or social media channels.

What is novel formatting?

Novel formatting refers to the way in which your manuscript is presented on the page. This includes things like the font and font size, the margins, the spacing between lines and paragraphs, and the placement of chapter headings and page numbers. Proper formatting makes your manuscript look polished and professional, and can make it easier for agents, editors, and publishers to read and evaluate.

How important is novel formatting?

While the quality of your writing is ultimately what matters most, formatting is still important because it affects how your manuscript is perceived. A well-formatted manuscript is more pleasant to read and easier to navigate, which can help keep readers engaged. Additionally, agents, editors, and publishers receive a lot of manuscripts, and a poorly formatted manuscript may be rejected out of hand simply because it’s difficult to read.

How difficult is novel formatting?

Novel formatting can be challenging, especially if you’re not familiar with the technical aspects of document formatting. There are many word processing programs and formatting styles, and it’s important to choose the right one for your needs. For example, some publishers have specific formatting requirements that you’ll need to follow in order to be considered. Additionally, different genres may have different conventions when it comes to formatting (for example, some genres may use larger font sizes or wider margins).

Using Atticus Writer for formatting

To simplify the formatting process, I used Atticus Writer, a popular app that allows writers to format their manuscripts easily and quickly. The app provides a range of formatting options, such as adjusting margins, line spacing, font, and font size. Atticus Writer also helps writers with structuring their manuscript by providing tools to organize chapters, sections, and headings.

Using Atticus Writer saved me a lot of time and effort when it came to formatting my novel. The app took care of the technical aspects of formatting, allowing me to focus on the creative aspects of writing.

The Waiting Game

Now that I’ve sent my manuscript out to beta readers, it’s time to play the waiting game. It’s difficult to be patient during this stage of the process, especially since I’m so eager to hear what my beta readers think. But I know that waiting is an essential part of the process, and that taking the time to get feedback from others is critical in making my story the best it can be. While I wait, I’ll continue working on other projects and keeping my creative energy flowing. And when the feedback finally comes in, I’ll be ready to take it all in and use it to make my story even stronger.

Conclusion

In conclusion, formatting your manuscript and receiving feedback from beta readers are essential steps in the writing process that can help you improve your story and make it more engaging for readers. As I send my manuscript out to beta readers, I’m both excited and nervous to hear their feedback. It’s always a bit scary to put your work out there, but I know that their feedback will be invaluable in helping me take my story to the next level.

I’m also grateful for the tools like Atticus Writer that make formatting my manuscript easier and more efficient. Without it, I would have spent a lot more time and energy on the technical aspects of formatting, which would have taken away from the creative side of writing.

Finally, I want to thank all of my beta readers in advance for their time and energy in reading and providing feedback on my manuscript. It’s a big ask, but their input will be critical in helping me bring my story to life. And to those who are interested in becoming a beta reader for my novel, I look forward to hearing from you and embarking on this journey together. Stay tuned for updates on the release date of Project A.E.O.N. and for sneak peeks at the cover art and more. And don’t forget to subscribe to my mailing list and follow me on social media to stay in the loop. 

From Idea to Publication: My Writing Process for Project A.E.O.N.

Writing a novel is a long and challenging process, but it’s also an incredibly rewarding one. In this post, I want to share my personal writing journey and the process I’m using for my current novel, code-named Project A.E.O.N. I hope that it will inspire and motivate you on your own writing journey.

For me, it all started with NaNoWriMo 2020. NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month, and is an annual writing challenge to write 50,000 words in the month of November. I decided to give it a try and was determined to finish my novel. The challenge gave me the push I needed to get started. I finished it, and it became the first draft of my novel.

When I started writing my first draft of Project A.E.O.N. I had a basic idea of where the story was going, but I didn’t have all the details worked out. I knew that the first draft would be rough and that there would be a lot of work to do to refine and improve the story.

For the NaNoWriMo challenge, my primary focus was on getting my ideas onto the page as quickly as possible. I wasn’t overly concerned with issues like sentence structure, grammar, or word choice—my goal was simply to get the story out of my head and onto paper.

By allowing myself to write freely and without worrying about getting everything perfect, I was able to tap into my creativity and bring the story to life in a way that felt authentic and true to my vision. While the resulting first draft was far from perfect, it gave me a solid foundation to build upon as I moved into the revision process.

Looking back, I can see how far the story has come since that first draft. The characters have developed, the plot has become more intricate, and the themes have become more nuanced. It’s a testament to the power of revision and the importance of not getting bogged down by the details in the first draft.

If you’re just starting out on your own writing journey, remember that the first draft is just the beginning. Don’t worry too much about getting everything perfect – focus on getting the ideas down on paper and let the story evolve naturally over time. With hard work, dedication, and a willingness to revise, you can turn a rough first draft into a polished and compelling novel.

As I am right in the middle of the revision process for Project A.E.O.N., I’m finding that it’s less hard work and more of a joyful exploration of the world and characters that I’ve created. Despite the many challenges of revising a first draft, I’m having a lot of fun getting to know my characters on a deeper level and exploring the themes and ideas that drive the story forward.

The revision process is a chance to refine and improve the story, to make it stronger and more engaging for readers. But it’s also a chance to spend more time in the world you’ve created, to engage with the characters you’ve brought to life, and to explore the themes and ideas that matter to you.

For me, revising Project A.E.O.N. has been a rewarding and enjoyable process, full of surprises and discoveries. It’s given me the chance to see my characters in a new light, explore different plot twists and turns, and refine my writing style in a way that feels more true to my voice.

If you’re in the midst of revising your own first draft, remember that it’s an opportunity to learn and grow as a writer, and to have fun exploring the world and characters you’ve created. Embrace the challenges, stay open to new ideas, and keep pushing forward—you never know where the revision process may take you!

Once I’ve completed the second draft of Project A.E.O.N. the next step will be to edit the novel and fix any common writing errors that may have crept in. This includes checking for grammar mistakes, correcting spelling errors, and ensuring that punctuation is used correctly throughout the manuscript.

After that, I’ll give it out to a selected group of test readers for feedback. Test readers are a crucial part of the writing process because they can offer insights and suggestions that I may not have considered. I’ll take their feedback into account and then edit the novel one more time, bringing it up to a third draft.

Finally, I’ll give it to a professional copy editor and then a proofreader. This final step ensures that the novel is polished and ready for publication.

Writing a novel is a challenging and rewarding experience, and the process of bringing it from an idea to a finished product can be a long and complex journey. However, with the right tools, process, and support, it can be a fulfilling one.

In this post, I’ve shared my writing process for Project A.E.O.N. from the initial NaNoWriMo challenge to the revision and editing process. While this post has been fairly long, there is still so much more to cover when it comes to the writing process, such as feedback and editing. In future blog posts, I plan to delve deeper into these topics and share the tools and processes I use to help bring my stories to life.

If you enjoyed this post and want to stay up to date with my writing journey, I invite you to sign up for my newsletter. You’ll get exclusive access to writing tips, updates on my latest projects, and more, including the chance to become a beta reader and get sneak peeks of my work in progress. You can also support me on Ko-Fi if you’d like to help me continue to create more content like this. Every little bit helps and is greatly appreciated.

Thank you for joining me on this journey, and I look forward to sharing more insights and tips with you in the future. Happy writing!

Announcing Project A.E.O.N.

Hello, everyone! I’m excited to share some exciting news with you all. My first novel, code-named Project A.E.O.N., is currently in the making and will be released soon.

In this novel, Ava Mason returns to her hometown of Aurora Bay, Oregon, only to find that strange things are happening. People are disappearing, rumors of cults and monsters are spreading, and the world seems to be on the brink of destruction. But Ava is not alone in her fight against these dark forces. She soon meets a mysterious girl and her robot companion, who take her on an epic adventure. Together with a group of unlikely friends, Ava must navigate through a web of mysteries in order to save the world from its impending doom.

Project A.E.O.N. is a story about the power of friendship, love, and trust in oneself and others. It’s about facing one’s fears and discovering the courage to fight for what’s right, even when all seems lost.

It’s a story that I’ve poured my heart and soul into, and I can’t wait to share it with you all. Stay tuned for updates on the release date of Project A.E.O.N. and for sneak peeks at the cover art and more. And don’t forget to subscribe to my mailing list and follow me on social media to stay in the loop. Thank you all for your support, and I can’t wait to embark on this new adventure with you all!

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